Wiggle
In junior high it's hard
To hide it when you're dancing
With a skinny girl
In a mini skirt
She doesn't mind, says so, smiling
But you are embarrassed by this
Betrayal
You told your friends
Who laughed and slapped
Your back but behind
Your back they bitched
And spit, and wished
It was them dancing
(Any suggestions as to where this should go?)
To hide it when you're dancing
With a skinny girl
In a mini skirt
She doesn't mind, says so, smiling
But you are embarrassed by this
Betrayal
You told your friends
Who laughed and slapped
Your back but behind
Your back they bitched
And spit, and wished
It was them dancing
(Any suggestions as to where this should go?)
posted by jesse at 6:30 PM
2 Comments:
dude it's weird i've been taking polls about random boners.
i like the first line break
i don't like "betrayal" getting its own line
where else does it have to go?
my professor demands our poems contain our emotional reaction to the situation in the poem and something we learned about ourselves as a result. it's bullshit, i know, but my grade depends on it.
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